The Tortoise and the two kids

Title	The Tortoise and the two kids
Orientation	Two kids were playing in the woods.Their names were Jeffrey    and Jill. The Tortoise name is Max and they walked into the woods in new york and went too far away and saw this big tortoise and started to cry.
And Problem	The two kids were going home but then a tortoise blocked their way to go home so Jeffrey picked up a stick and threw it at the tortoise and the tortoise ran up to them. The two kids were running down the hill and went to hide but the tortoise could see them...
Events	The tortoise was as wide as a building and as tall as a mouse.They were running for their lives and they saw a house that looks scary and looks the a witch house and a kingdom and jeffrey and jill went inside the house and saw a real witch and looks horry and yucky face and a juju lip and stared to laugh but then they heard a  noiz coming from outside then when the went outside it was tortoise and got scared but then they were trying to get inside the the witch locked it so they can't come in.
Solution	Then jeffrey and jill went to there house to see their mum and dad so they went back to the same house but their mum and dad were lying down dead and jeffrey called 111 then the ambulance came but they could do nothing about it so they caught a man with a gun and trying to shoot the two kids but they were safe because the police him and took him to jail.