LI: To write an explanation using TEEL paragraphs .
This week we have been revisiting explanation writing. Next week is our assessment week so we did this collaborative challenge to remind ourselves what is needed when we write explanations. I have been working with Hosea and Ellenora on our explanation about our PBS care values Confidence , Attitude , Respect and Excellence and Innovation we have witten 4 paragraphs of teel to every care value and teel stands for Topic sentence , Explain , Evidence and Link . Me , Hosea and Ellenora use all of our opinion to come up with 4 paragraphs for teel that represents each PBS care values and we have made an screencastify about our 16 paragraphs of our care values , something i found interesting about writing about an explanation is being able to understand how to write a TEEL paragraph and being able to share my ideas and communicate with others .
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ReplyDeleteHello Hosea!
ReplyDeleteThat is an outstanding explanation! I like how you and your group all collaborated in the video, it shows that you are all participating on the group activity. However, you didn't explain what a T.E.E.L paragraph is. I think its important to base your blurb or the video on the topic because there might be others reading the blog post that doesn't know what the acronym T.E.E.L means. Other than that your blog post is superb. I have a question tho, what does T.E.E.L mean?
Good job!
Azatulah
T Title
ReplyDeleteE Explaination
E Evidence
L Link