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Friday, 2 June 2017

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Story organiser


[Insert or link your brainstorm in here.] Slowly, a foot moved, then the trunk, then a loud growl shook the cavern...

Start writing here! Enter your basic plot ideas on the left and write your story on the right.

Title
Baby Bear
Orientation

Baby bear pushed mum in the water and then baby bear climb a tall cliff and decided to do a moonwalk but he slip into the water and got too many fish in his mouth so he got up and wanted to go again but when he climb up he saw mummy bear jumping off the cliff so he enjoyed himself  jumping off the cliff.
Problem

The problem is when baby bear went again she could not breath into the water so mama bear didn't know about it  so when she was looking for baby bear s when she dived inside the water she could see baby bear so mama bear got her and pouted her next to her so she told baby bear do not move before you have no fish to eat.
Events

Mum jumped

Baby bear started climbing
Baby bear got to cliff peak  

Baby bear got Pushed off the cliff


Solution

Then they went home and had a feed with there family and sleep together.



1 comment:

  1. Good morning Hosea I really like the way you put a lot of effort into your work. What were you learning while you where doing this activity? and how did you learn it?

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