6 sentence story

L.I. Use 6 sentences to set up the structure of a narrative

Add verbs, adverbs and adjectives to a text to make it interesting for the reader

Xodus kept many keys, but he couldn't find the one he was looking for. He got angry. He had memorized all his keys and knew exactly which key opened which lock. No friends, no family, he was lonely. Luckily he had his imaginary cat.There was a knock on his door but when he approached, nobody was there.

Today my group wrote 6 sentence stories to help us take risks with our writing. We did this by sharing our ideas and writing sentence that drop hints about what was happening in the picture we chose to write about. We helped each other by suggesting ideas to each other to make our stories more interesting. 

Hot Cake Recipe

LI: To structure and write a procedural text

For writing we have been learning how to write a procedural text. To do this we used the recipe we followed at Tech. This procedure tells the reader how to make hot cakes. Before we wrote this we worked collaboratively to order the pictures Mrs Anderson took of us making the hotcakes. Once we had done that we matched each photo with a verb. A verb is an action word and tells anyone following the recipe what they need to do. After that we use the verbs as sentence starters and collaboratively wrote a list of instructions.

Bee´s on the looss

L.I To write and form with and narrative.

L.I:To write a narrative in the form of a play.

For wiring we had to polish our dialogue. Our story was could Bees on the loose. It was about a girl was building  tree house then they have a rest. After a hour she went out side to see the tree house. Then bees came out no where. Then start Chasing her.       

Writing l Orientation l Play

LI:To write a narrative in form of a play

We had to rite a  play for the other group. We started by making 2 story boards about the play we gonna do. Then we did the dialogue on who is doing what and who you are. Now we had to work on the orientation.